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"I'm searching for answers
Cause something is not right.
I follow the signs,
I'm close to the fire.

I fear that soon you'll reveal
Your dangerous mind.

It's in your eyes, what's on your mind.
I fear your smile and the promise inside.
It's in your eyes, what's on your mind.
I fear your presence, I'm frozen inside.

I'm searching for answers
Not questioned before.
The curse of awareness,
There's no peace of mind.
As your true colors show
A dangerous sign.

It's in your eyes, what's on your mind.
I see the truth that you've buried inside.
It's in your eyes, what's on your mind.
There is no mercy, just anger I find.

I just have to know, while I still have time.
Do I have to run, or hide away from you?

It's in your eyes, what's on your mind.
I see the truth that you've buried inside.
It's in your eyes, what's on your mind.
There is no mercy, just anger I find.

It's in your eyes, what's on your mind.
I see the truth that you've buried inside.
It's in your eyes, what's on your mind.
There is no mercy, just anger I find. I find...

some of you ask me to post it as a deviation.
I've done this kiss listening a song from within temptation which correspond so well to Faust and Cendre story...
I'm in love with Sharon voice...

(c)"A dangerous mind" by Within Temptation search in: [link] for listening^^


Faust/Cendre(c):iconorpheelin:
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Critiques


:iconkwolf13:
This piece is very moving. You can just feel the emotion, and how desperately he wants their lips to touch. I love the rain effect as well. The streaks of water on their skin are very well done. I wish I could pull that off as well as you have.

I love his eye as well. The color is great, and the emotion in them is so realistic. Her hair is very well done as well. I do think there should be more contrast, and more definition as to where the light source is actually coming from. But all in all thats the only flaw I see. The rest is absolutely divine.
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:iconwager:
I think the emotion in this piece is captivating! You can feel her longing and his want. The effects of the rain just add to all of that. I've always thought of ran as a great addition to any emotional piece.

for color I believe you did an amazing job. However I think maybe having a bit more contrast. For instance darkening the sky so the figures look like they are in the midst of the storm and slightly highlighting them with that white mist outline where the rain hits them.

keep the lighting the way it is and it would feel like they are being lit by lightening flashes.

Anatomy wise, the figure to the rights forehead is a bit off it slopes back a little to sharp.

All and all it is an amazing piece and again the emotion is amazing!
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:iconff-7:
C'est beeaaaauuuu *.*

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:iconnephyla:
Bon c'est un bon baiser bien torride ça ! ^^ Cendre à un nez un poil plis rond et courbé que d'hab mais c'est pas vilain et j'ai la sensation que Faust a une tête plus grosse que sa compagne, à moins que ce ne soit elle qui manque de crâne.^^

Mais sinon ça roxe baby ! ^3^ Simple et efficace!

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:iconbio-electric-anemone:
That is so beautiful!! And those characters are so good looking. *w*

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:iconkatikut:
Ah ça me fait plaisir XD Je suis trop à fond su ce dessin! *3*

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:iconskulblakasaphira:
C'est vraiment magnifique et la chanson va de paire avec le dessin ^^
Splendide c:

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:iconkalarepon:
really tempting :)

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Dance with The Devil
:iconhisanakuchiki:
J'adore la sensualité dans cette image!^^ Et puis Cendre est si douce dessus et Faust si dangereux! Le contraste est parfait!^^
Faut que j'aille écouter cette chanson!^^

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:iconjozzlyn:
so passionate (:
very nice~
:iconfararden:
Ah, les baisers sous la pluie...Ca méritait bien d'être posté sé;parément! Maintenant je vais aller écouter la chanson... :D
:iconorpheelin:
nan il a la tete trop grosse mais pas possible de resizer avec la pluie tout strop galère.... alors fais comme si... lol

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